Will Shortz isn't taking many "words that can precede X" themes these days, as they've become done to death, and as Jules mentioned, ...
read moreWill Shortz isn't taking many "words that can precede X" themes these days, as they've become done to death, and as Jules mentioned, "___ DOWN" puzzles are falling into that camp too. But there's still room for one that offers something extra. I appreciate the tight set — it's hard to think of more BUTTON types than SNOOZE, LIKE (think: Facebook), BELLY, PANIC.

I like to play the early-week "name that theme" game, and it took me a while to figure out what was going on. Partially in a good way, since it's tough to figure out what SNOOZE-FEST, LIKE YOU KNOW etc. have in common.
But partially in a confusing way, as I stared at TOOK A TOLL ON, UNGARBED, RETROFIT, and NIMBUS CLOUD for ages. There had to be a link! Who would use the word UNGARBED if it weren't necessary for some clever theme?
Will is much more lax about this "theme obfuscation" issue than other editors. Rich Norris over at the Los Angeles Times won't allow long acrosses (8+ letters) when themers are arranged in the down direction, because it confuses people. Mike Shenk at the Wall Street Journal is more lenient, but it's still frowned upon. I tend to side with them because regular solvers have been trained to look for theme in the longest across answers.
This can be a real problem when it comes to grid construction. Jules already went up to 80 words (two past the max allowable), so simply breaking up TOOK A TOLL ON and NIMBUS CLOUD isn't the answer. I have a feeling that including more long down fill would have been a good direction — perhaps taking out the block between TOOTED and IRE (after breaking up TOOK A TOLL ON), and similar strategies throughout the grid.
I think it's possible to retain all five themers, all of which were great phrases and made the theme meaty, while elevating the elegance. Cleanup in aisle AGA ASA OTOS EEKS! Tough to say for sure without rolling up my sleeves, though.